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Define Yourself or Someone Else Will...

 And chances are, you won't be happy with the outcome.  

Every moment, you are defining yourself.  Whether you are aware of it, or not--notice what you are doing and add this phrase "I am a person who..." and don't sugarcoat it!  

Don't judge yourself. That's not what this is about.  EVALUATE your actions, decide if they are who you want to be, and then continue doing them, or do something differently, and move on.

We can all think of unpleasant, embarrassing ways to complete that sentence.  ( I am a person who gets up at midnight and eats a cheese sandwich)That's part of being human; however, if it is change you are looking for, then a clear look at yourself is the first  requirement. 

Define yourself, or someone else, less interested in your welfare, will define you.

 

 

 

 

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A Transition Poem.

Motionless, directionless, focus-less

Fear grasps at polluted air--

Unless and until  focus, direction and motion

take hold. Then the relief through change.

Comes a transition every time you move--

which for a moment replaces fear,  who nevertheless

may call again soon.

 

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A Lifetime Supply

You have been given a lifetime supply of that body in the mirror.  So literally, until you are dead, you are in charge of that! But WAIT.  Whose body do you see in the mirror?Well, you might answer--"MY body of course."    Who just said that? Who just claimed the body to belong to THEM?  The body is separate from the mind, and that is what I'm getting at.  

There is a YOU that is different than that changing body in the mirror.  You exist in more than your body.  There is greatness in you that lives on and on, unchanged while  the body does it's crazy growing, changing, dying thing. 

When you understand this, you know you have this current body for a limited time, and yet there is a wise, timeless self that is you, too, that can guide you well. So let's begin to enjoy this trip.  Be grateful you have a body to experience life through.

You get to decide....who will you love? What will you change, how will you live? Who gets to be a part of your world? Your choice! 

 

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Like Being Born

After we enter the world from inside our mother, we don't spend time worrying about "what if I should have stayed in there? I've never done this before, what if I can't do it?", and thank goodness!.  We just start breathing, and go from there. We learn, we grow, we survive, and I would like to see all of us take the next step above surviving, and THRIVE! 
 

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Use Transition Words

Read more at http://grammar.yourdictionary.com/style-and-usage/list-transition-words.html#lvWck0ixkSJYmYth.99

List of Transition Words

Anyone has ever received criticism about a written assignment has quite possibly been told to use more transition words, which is where a list of transition words come in handy.

List of Transition Words

While you do not want your paper or other written piece to sound like a long string of transition words, consider adding some of these suggestions from our list of transition words when appropriate in order to spice up your work and to make the sections flow more smoothly from one to another.

What follows is a list of transition words which you might want to use in your writing from time to time. Note that some of them are phrases and not singular words.

  • Therefore
  • However
  • Moreover
  • Lastly
  • Next
  • Also
  • Furthermore
  • In addition to
  • Similarly
  • Likewise
  • Accordingly
  • Hence
  • Consequently
  • As a result
  • Thereby
  • Otherwise
  • Subsequently
  • Thus
  • So then
  • Wherefore
  • Generally
  • Usually
  • For the most part
  • As a rule
  • Ordinarily
  • Regularly
  • In particular
  • For instance
  • Particularly
  • Especially
  • Such as
  • Including
  • Namely
  • For example
  • As an example
  • In this case
  • Above all
  • Singularly
  • Likewise
  • Coupled with
  • Compared to
  • In comparison to
  • Together with
  • Besides
  • In brief
  • In short
  • In conclusion
  • In the meantime
  • Soon
  • Later
  • In the meanwhile
  • Afterward
  • Earlier
  • In summary
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • Before
  • After
  • By the way
  • Incidentally
  • As a result of
  • Accidentally
  • Here
  • There
  • Over there
  • Opposite
  • Under
  • Beyond
  • In the distance
  • To the left
  • To the right


 

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Ready?

I enjoyed this article and think you will, too. It has the TOP 5 things!!!

Ready For College? Why Some Students Are More Prepared Than Others

By Lisa Heffernan

http://www.nbcnews.com/feature/college-game-plan/ready-college-why-some-students-are-more-prepared-others-n531141

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Exceptional Senior Essay on Utopia

I discovered a writer among us today. Senior,  Larry Zumwalt. Silent,  just a slip of a fellow who is in PODS--he sits up straight and he seems to be smiling to himself, mildly amused by the rest of us, kindly, but not necessarily open to long conversations. With his permission I will print his essay here, for your enjoyment. 

Larry has given me permission to share

 

Larry Zumwalt

12/06/2015

Senior English Essay

Unfortunately, this world is a far cry from paradise. One man will lay into his bed for a warm night of rest, while another searches for a dry shelter from the rain. Another man will wipe the sweat from his brow, admiring his perfect yard, damning the weeds that sullied it. His neighbor wipes the blood from his lip, admiring the red portrait that he's coughed into the sink, damning the cancer that caused it. The flaws in our world lie behind a clouded window for most well-off people. And for those who can discern the silhouette behind the window, they are simply ignorant of it. If it's not my problem, then why worry about it, right? That's a question that most would ask themselves, and a question that reveals one of the many flaws in human nature. The main problems on this planet are due to people's interactions with each other, our interactions with nature (and it's interactions with us), and the imperfections in general human essence. A true Utopia would be void of such inadequacies.

It really is an anomaly how severely we humans contradict ourselves in our interactions with one-another. Some of us demonstrate altruism in ways such as founding or participating in non-profit organizations to help the needy. Others, possessed by hate, power, or some other folly, devote their lives to war and genocide. In my Utopia, such a deviation would be non-existent. Altruism would be an innate quality that all humans possess. Rather than kicking those who are down, they would help them up.

They say that we've been blessed with the "perfect planet". That means we should take care of it. Even worse than not taking care of it, we hinder it. The Mississippi river dumps 1.5 million metric tonnes of nitrogen pollution into the gulf of Mexico yearly.(www.conserve-energy-future.com) The garbage dumped into the ocean every year is roughly around 14 billion pounds.(www.conserve-energy-future.com) The "Great Smog" that happened in London, 1952 killed approximately four hundred thousand, people in just a few days.(www.conserve-energy-future.com) These facts here aren't much more than a cup scooped out of an ocean polluted with countlessly many more facts. This would not be a problem in my Utopia. It's people would realize that their houses are not their home. Their planet is their home. Would you dump your waste into your home? Similar to treating nature poorly, nature treats us poorly as well. Disease, plague, famine, and more debase the quality of life for extremely large amounts of people. This Utopia would be unburdened by these issues, because of their altruistic values, they'd have dedicated enough effort into curing most diseases, and evenly distributing wealth and food for all.

Greed, hate, lust, these and a myriad of other immoralities fill the essence of the humans on our planet today. From stingy crooks out to steal from the vulnerable, to perverts prowling the streets for hapless victims, the souls of our world are sadly filled with vice. Changing the being of so many people is a nearly inconceivable prospect, but the corruption that nearly all humans have in some form would need to be expunged in order to achieve Utopia.

Our world is not paradise, undoubtedly. A true Utopia, which is nearly impossible to imagine, would include better interactions in between its people, better interactions with nature, and a perfection in general human nature.

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Who's the Boss of You?

After working with young people for 20 years, inside the classroom and out, I have learned a basic human truth.

We all have the innate drive to 'captain our ship' (I borrowed that from a poem and a recent interview I watched on bulletproof.com). Whether or not we confess to it, or even realize it ourselves, we humans have an internal mantra:

Who is the ONLY person that is going to tell me to JUMP? ME

And how high am I going to jump? EXACTLY AS HIGH AS I WANT!

And who is going to stop me? NOBODY!!

In my humble opinion, this is the crux of all conflict. Period. More on this later, as it unfolds in my brain.

Thanks for reading.  :)

 




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Teaching to Learn

As the 'teacher' of 11th and 12th grade English here at Edgenuity, it is quite advantageous for me to take the class I am facilitating. First, I am working my way through senior English--and have a few insights as a result.

#1.  It is REALLY hard for me to do more than an hour at a time.  I love the curriculum. I find the way they present it appealing, however,  I get tired and I'm sure our students do, too.  So pace yourself, daily rather expecting yourself to work for several hours a day on one class.

At first, I struggled with the writing because I, like many students, feel trapped at first when asked to answer a question about myself. To myself, I am quite dull.  Who would want to know who my hero is?? Why should I tell anyone such a personal thing?? I don't know.

I found my way through that problem of 'writer's block' by opening an empty WORD document on another computer while I worked through the lesson.  Then, when it was time to write, I shut down the class and got myself a cup of coffee, and puttered around the house cleaning, with the topic 'gelling' in my mind--and the blank WORD document open and ready for my input.

I couldn't think of a hero. I thought to myself:  "When was I really impressed and amazed by something someone did.  That's when I remembered my surprise birthday party, which made me think of my sister, and how often she does things that surprise me. (Like caring for a sick neighbor for years, for example--who would do that?)  So, thinking about my memories instead of thinking about a specific person helped me.

And now I will share my "Hero" essay with you!

Diane Rubie, my sister-- born just two years and three months before me is heroic on a daily basis.  She is just a person. A mom, a sister, a wife and a daughter. What makes her a hero?  There are so many stories I could relay—but I will tell you one from our childhood that encapsulates her heroism.  It starts with the words:

“Surprise! Happy Birthday Cheryl!”

It was my first birthday party in the 13 years of my life—I was surrounded by my best friends—it was a slumber party, and there was a cake and GIFTS for ME. A birthday party for ME! First. Ever.  She had treacherously plotted with my best friends, behind our mother’s back. We were raised with the rule that a birthday party is an unacceptable act of worshiping mankind over God. In retrospect I see that with five children in our tribe, it was a financially prudent belief.

In organizing that party for me, she made me feel like a SPARKLY person. Although I had never felt friendless, unloved or unlucky, I had accepted the family ‘no birthday’ policy.   When I bloated my mother’s uterus in 1963, it was her fifth and final pregnancy and the beginning of her dedication to Herbert W. Armstrong, or at least his  translation of The Bible.

But now I saw that we have choices. Diane had risked a ‘good paddling’ with the well worn piece of wood, nicknamed  “The Board of Education”.  She was always more courageous, independent, and sure of herself than I was. While I have no doubt she was doing what came naturally to her—( expressing her own unique version of life in a way that pleased her), she was a hero to me.  

Over the years, it has been  her refusal to blindly abide by society’s accepted rules, her commitment to doing  what feels RIGHT rather than what is easy, and her absolutely dogged devotion to making life more sparkly wherever she is, that I not only admire, but I advocate for, daily.

From writing this essay, assigned in my 12th grade Edgenuity course, I see that our heroes teach us who we are. They are heroic to us because they display traits we value—and that makes us who we are…and that’s why we need them!

The End

HOW I LEARN--Published in September

 

Hello students!  I am taking a 'leap of faith' here and showing you the first step in my learning.  I am your 12th grade English teacher, I have earned a Master's Degree in Education, a Bachelor's degree in Language Arts with a minor in Reading, and an Associates of Arts and Science. I have twenty years of experience reading with, to and for students like yourself, and guess what? THIS IS MY FIRST (first. yes, I said FIRST) introduction to Gilgamesh!

As always, in order to be able to teach it, I must learn it, and THIS is my first step--I do this before I read the actual text because for me, I will understand the text MUCH better with the background. If you would like it read aloud to you with perfect pronunciation, by a teacher who already understands the story, DON'T listen to this.

I am posting this so you can understand that no matter how much you learn, there is always more; and it is always a little awkward when you first interact with it. So, if you dare to hear me learning, and you need help with Gilgamesh, listen!


Today was our first day of orientation at Puyallup Digital Learning (PDL) and it went very well!  We were happy to see the returning students and meet the new ones!  My favorite thing about PDL is the diversity! We have students who are here to work ahead, some who are here so they can pursue their passions (Dancing, Bike racing, Horse Husbandry and more), and some who are here because they just want to try school a DIFFERENT WAY. I consider  every one of these students to be pioneers and heroes. They have taken a bold step away from tradition, and I am proud to be among them!

SO.  Welcome to all!  I found this edgenuity you tube. If you feel like a refresher, please watch.  There are a few tiny differences, one being that your log in page should look different- (it should be the white sis login) -but this gives you a quick review.

Also--she shows you how to go in to RESOURCES and find an orientation  video in case you miss our orientation.

Happy Learning!

How to get around in e2020

Ms. Ray

 

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This is how I learn

Hello students!  I am taking a 'leap of faith' here and showing you the first step in my learning.  I am your 12th grade English teacher, I have earned a Master's Degree in Education, a Bachelor's degree in Language Arts with a minor in Reading, and an Associates of Arts and Science. I have twenty years of experience reading with, to and for students like yourself, and guess what? THIS IS MY FIRST (first. yes, I said FIRST) introduction to Gilgamesh!

As always, in order to be able to teach it, I must learn it, and THIS is my first step--I do this before I read the actual text because for me, I will understand the text MUCH better with the background. If you would like it read aloud to you with perfect pronunciation, by a teacher who already understands the story, DON'T listen to this.

I am posting this so you can understand that no matter how much you learn, there is always more; and it is always a little awkward when you first interact with it. So, if you dare to hear me learning, and you need help with Gilgamesh, listen!

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